All Comments on 'Midlife Ch. 02'

So keep the chapters coming. I think ole Pete has finally started to grow up and Maria is the incubator. Thanks.

As with BigJohn, I too like where this is going. I suspected it from the first chapter. I also like the way you're filling out the characters and making them multi-dimensional. Keep it coming please, Lucity.

LitID: Tyro999

I don’t think so.

Still need an editor or a better version of Dragon.